January 27th, 2007

marvel - purple barton

Deconstructing Drunk

Title: Drunk
This is probably my most popular one-shot, with the possible exception of Getting It. kenzier asked for commentary like forever ago, in one of those memes that I never end up finishing. So. If there's something else you'd like to see commentary'd, drop me a comment.
Summary: Spike is trashed, and Faye babysits him. I am so lame at summaries.
Fandom: Cowboy Bebop
Word Count: 816
Rating/Warnings: Definite R. Het. Slightly OOC Spike.
Pairing: Spike/Faye
A/N: This happens between Jupiter Jazz Part II and Bohemian Rhapsody. It's random. I was trying to write an angsty songfic, of all things. It was going to be Faye out drinking right after Spike's death, and the song was "Grace Is Gone" by DMB. Yeah, I know. But it mostly got turned into One More Song. Except Spike and Faye had other ideas, which I think are better. This is sort of a different take on Faye than one normally sees, cause I see her as being, quite honestly, a lot like me at times- brash and almost simple on the outside, but with tons of thought playing out behind the scenes. The ending is a little awkward, cause.. well, with the tense and all, it was about to get a lot more awkward. This is back when the only porn I had written was Triptych, which, btw, don't read. I still don't like writing present tense porn, and I'll Be Your Baby Tonight was the only place I really pulled it off. Anyway, on to the good part!

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